And this is the one I know YOU all have been waiting for: SMUT galore...(and more on its way...)
The new chapter (Chapter 3 of 7) can be found in AooO, here or if you wanna read from the beginning again, here.
Dears, have fun while reading (in any "position" you want...)...Oh, and if anyone would accidentally get a nosebleed- please do tell me...I would like to know...
PS Anaapenas! Please help yourself...If you'd like...
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY THANKS SO EXCITED WILL READ NOW
ReplyDeletejust a little bit confused on your AooO where you posted up the fic you said it's the third chapter but it also says on there 4 chapters just a little confused (NOT THAT I'M COMPLAINING IT'S EVEN BETTER THAT YOU HAVE MORE CHAPTERS OUT)I am just really confused
ReplyDeleteThanks for pointing it out. I have fixed it now...
Deleteyou know there's a good song I heard of a while ago that I would think would be cool for your warrior baek dong soo fanfic if you want to in the future (I KNOW WHAT YOUR THINKING ANOTHER FANFIC!!! I GOT TO CONTINUE THIS ONE FIRST LOL) but it's just an idea the song is called poison by groove coverage (and no it's not nicole scherzinger's song poison this is a different one)
ReplyDeletethe song is actually really sexy and I think it's really cool for dong soo and yeo un fanfic or mv especially a fanfic with smut in ot a nerjaveika mv with smut lol
here's the lyrics:
Your cruel device
Your blood, like ice
One look could kill
My pain, your thrill
[Chorus]
I want to love you but I better not touch
I want to hold you but my senses tell me to stop
I want to kiss you but I want it too much
I want to taste you but your lips are venomous poison
You're poison running through my veins
You're poison, I don't want to break these chains
Your mouth, so hot
Your web, I'm caught
Your skin, so wet
Black lace on sweat
[Chorus]
You're poison running through my veins
You're poison, I don't want to break these chains
Run deep inside my veins
Its burning deep inside my veins
One look could kill
My pain, your thrill
[Chorus]
You're poison running through my veins
You're poison, I don't want to break these chains
Poison
[Chorus]
You're poison running through my veins
You're poison, I don't want to break these chains
Poison
and here's the song if interested http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9U77bsDnC4w
Hahaha, this is a cover of Poison by Alice Cooper - that's great! I love the original one!
DeleteI'll think about it, I am sure I can find some inspiration :D !
OH wow I didn't know I'm listening to alice cooper's song poison it's really good I didn't know of him I thought it was a girl because of the name alice but now thinking about it I think I may of heard of alice copper before and the poison song sang by him I think I may have heard before lol
DeleteJUST READ THE CHAPTER I LOVE IT WHAT A AWESOME START TO MORE SMUT HEHE I LOVED IT I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE I AM JUST BEGGING FOR MORE HAHA
ReplyDeleteOhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Goddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHs@9g9$ua382!%#%3ol53%37jwem0@34#56)*&!!!!!
Awesome chap! Fantastic from beginning to end.
I was having a reaaaaaaally bad day, I was feeling kinda depressed. But then I read this chapter and it made me smile so big, I was very happy. So I say to you, thank you so much! I cannot express how grateful I truly am.
Update soon!^^
- Priscylla ;)
priscylla@ I KNOW RIGHT I LOVE IT TOO MADE ME ALOT HAPPIER just one question priscylla I'd like to ask if you don't mind how come you don't write your name in the box?
DeleteWow, thanks LOL! Thanks, I am sooooo happy you like my chapter - I worked very hard on it...
Deleteand you are welcome, I am so happy that I could make your day better! I so know the feeling ;)
I am very much looking forward to your next chapters
Delete@Maria
ReplyDeleteI got used to write like this on the Internet. lol
It's an old habit and "old habits die hard", you know? XD
Now it's my turn to ask questions (heh!): How old are you? Where are you from? I'm asking cause "Maria" is not an English name and you give the impression of being very young. lol
- Priscylla ;) ROFL
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ReplyDeleteyou must not tell anyone because they will probably think I'm weird because I read this kind of stuff lol but I guess they will know since I just gave (embarrassingly) my age away I hope you and especially TA-MEAUT don't think I'm weird I gave my age away partially since I don't want to be pestered about my age (of course I'm not saying you are a pesterer or anything like that)
Deleteor in case they think I'm too young
Delete(which I know I am) but when it come's to ta-meaut's posts I just like to live my age out of it so I hope you won't go on about it too much and say I'm too young to be reading this and that so yh any-ways I hope especially you ta-meaut that your not creeped out about this and my age
AAAAAAAAAAHAHAHHAHAHHA! No worries Maria, I had kinda figured you out already and I can honestly tell you that when I was your age I read far worse smut than what is in my fanfics ;) and it hasn't affected me in any bad ways whatsoever! (...I think....)
DeleteBesides you have pushed the button saying you are old enough to read so you can't sue me if I shock you ;P
HAHA no it's ok I also have heard that there are kids younger than me that have read really smutty manga and hentai and some of them aren't even boys lol YES girls lol and some of them are even younger ,,,, so yh I think if your wise enough to understand that smutty manga isn't real then it's okay,,,, and I think it's okay unless your actually going around doing that kinds of stuff lol,,,,, honestly what gave it a way my age lol (I know your not dumb and I know all of you guys on here are probably smart and knew) but seriously what gave away that I was young was it my use of writing and I hardly use punctuation lol or was it because I use caps sometimes usually when I'm angry or happy and excited about something HAHA?????
Deletehmm, Its like you said before, it was more of a feeling I got.
Delete@Maria
ReplyDeleteWhoaaaa, calm down! LOL
I'm all for not judging others. Judging people you don't know is just really stupid, so I'm definitely not judging you nor your choices in any way. ^^
I actually kind of like you. You seem to be cute and bubbly... ^^'
So don't worry, everything is ok. I only ask you to be careful on the internet, alright? :)
BTW, my name is Priscylla , I'm 20 years old and I'm from Brazil.
- Priscylla (duh!) ;)
HEHE AWWWWWWWWWW THANK YOU yh because I started to panic when I told you my age and I was OH NO lol sometimes when I'm so eager to write something I don't think about the consequences of what I say lol,,,, and yes I am very careful on the internet sometimes when I go on certain sites I get a feeling that it's ok or I get a feeling that it's not ok and when it's not ok then I come off of that site so I am careful with what I do
ReplyDelete(I try to be anyway haha) I am pretty open-minded about things I don't mean bout smutty fanfics or anything but I'm very open minded about life, religion, politics and art,,,, and thank you very much for not judging I also agree on that as well judging people you don't know is stupid,,,, and I do very much be careful about what I do and the choices I make,,, and wow your from brazil cool x
Just keep up the good intentions like that and be careful about all the weirdoes out there.
Deleteyes I will I am very much trying to steer clear of them,,,, thank you very much!!!! for your concern xxxx
DeleteAND AWWWWWWWW YOU THINK I'M BUBBLY AND CUTE WHY THANK YOU!!!! x *I am beaming*
ReplyDeleteIt's good to be an open-minded person most of the time.So, please, don't ever change. :D
ReplyDeleteAwwww... The way you express yourself is very adorable. I want to squeeze your cheeks! XD LOL
I'm gonna catch some sleep, it's been a pretty tiring day.
See you later!
- Priscylla ;)
OH MY frakking gods. I need an inhaler or something. I cannot breathe to save my life. This is what I call SMUT! the explosion of uncontrollable lust and love *gasps for breath* The lust I could feel it radiating, and the tension, and the need and desperation. Gosh it was just overpowering. Seriously overpowering.
ReplyDeleteThe quality of your writing astounds me. I honestly thought I would never be so engrossed in a fanfiction like I'm right now. This only happened when I was an avid reader of JP & Craig fics (my ultimate OTP).
I don't know how you do it, but there is something about the way you write smut that is just so... intense.
I loved how you showed exactly what Un-ah was thinking the whole way through it. Especially at this part "For a moment it strikes me that maybe you hadn't thought I would be so untouched after all this time, for you must have felt it when you entered me. My heart clenches to think that you would believe me so disloyal, but then I think of how I ruthlessly I discarded you and what you were offering so many years ago and I understand that you have had no reason to think otherwise." You had me feeling so many emotions.
I actually ended up reading it SO SO SO slowly cos I was desperate to make it last, I kept taking little breaks and then going back to it .. gutted I've finished it now. I guess I will just keep re-reading this till you post the next chapter.
I am sooo rolling around on the floor squeeling right now. Oh My Gosh, thanks so much for your comment, cannot say enough how much it means to me. I am so euphoric that I can make you read it slowly and go back to it - makes me feel very accomplished.
DeleteAnd thank you again for posting it on your tumblr, I feel so awesome!
you are, awesome ta-meaut
DeleteThank YOU for letting me post it there. All the Dong Soo & Yeo Woon fans should read your fics. It makes life better. ^_^
DeleteI even download your fics and put it on my phone to read every time I go to bed. lol I'm too addicted to your writing.
actually @anaapenas thats how I find most warrior baek dong soo fics and how I found ta-meaut's work was because you posted it up and your tumblr so I very much thank you
DeleteHahahaha, I feel like drugs now - making life seemingly better and people go around with my stuff on their phones (squeeel...)
DeleteHAHA
Delete@anaapenas this chapter was amazing I have been waiting for this lol,,,,you must bit it on your dongsooslashyeoun tumblr page
ReplyDelete@priscylla good night I hope you have a good sleep,,,, and don't worry you can count that I will not change when it comes to openmindedess HAHA and thank you again for calling me cute HAHA (AWWWWWWWWWW YOU WANT TO SQUEEZE MY CHEEKS HAHA XD)
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Deletethere's another song that I reckon is good for dong soo and yeo un malchik gay by t.a.t.u I remember first hearing that song when I was watching horohoro and tao ren vids (there from the anime shaman king if your not aware of the anime) horohoro and ren ren't actually homosexual but alot of people were pairing them up together as a yaoi couple HAHA lol there's also alot of smut fanfics out there of them on fanfiction.net http://www.fanfiction.net/
ReplyDeletewell anyways here's the song if you haven't heard of it before it's really good in my opinion and I think it would suit dong soo and yeo un for and mv or a smutty fanfiction lol or just any old dong soo and yeo un fanfic doesn't have to be smut lol well you get the point: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_woaEhBshXE
Thanks for the tip, I will consider it.
Deletenerjaveika should totally make an MV of dong soo and yeo un with the song malchik gay or anyone any person out there that makes dong soo and yeo un MVs maybe hongmaingaotuyet lol Ta-meaut you seem to talk to nerjaveika alot when she comments on here please ask her if she can make a dong soo and yeo un mv with malchik gay she probably won't want to because it's quite a cliche song for yaoi literally loads of people who love yaoi use malchik gay song lol
ReplyDeleteI don't really like myself when people ask me directly to write something because I don't work like that, so I think I won't ask Nerjaveika either. But I am sure she will continue to make awesome videos with great music that inspire her. Maybe you oculd try making videos yourself...You seem to have lots of ideas.
Deleteyh I do but maybe I will in the future when I have more confidence I just don't know how to make them so maybe I will in the future just not yet
Deletehere's avafanfics warrior baek dong soo fanfic chapter 5 out http://avafanfics.tumblr.com/post/16620562994/bringing-us-back-to-the-beginning-5
ReplyDeletethis was a beautiful chapter sad as well I thought it was very emotional and yeo un was far more mean and cruel in this one which is good cause we get to see some of yeo un's resentment I can't wait to read the next chapter and when the sexual situations will happen
two words: GIANT. NOSEBLEED
ReplyDeleteDo you know that this is one hell of an erotic, hot MASTERPIECE? I think I just died from the heat. This fic get's better and better with each chapter, I've no idea how you do it tameaut. Keep it coming, its absolutly fantastic!
I agree with you tansan@ keep it coming keep the next smutty chapters coming lol
DeleteThanks for the nosebleed! (Just love when that happens :D )
DeleteI am so moved that you love it that much...I am gonna work hard on the next chapters.
just read chapter 6 of avafanfics fan fic it was amazing!!! I remember when I was talking on kcomments popv wordpress blog there was a lot of comments on it would be cool if jin ju went to the dark side to houksa chorong for a bit and what I like about ava is she seems to touch on things in the show that was never actually touched upon,,, also how she's made yeo un cruel but sweet in this chapter so beautiful I felt the emotion anyways here it is:http://avafanfics.tumblr.com/post/16679796700/bringing-us-back-to-the-beginning-6
ReplyDeleteI don't want to sound rude but why on earth do you come here to comment about avafanfics?
Deleteoh because I like to mention other stuff I find good to not just ta-meauts but also (if ta-meaut does read it) I like to know from ta-meaut what she thinks because she is more skilled in writing than I am so I simply just want to know what she thinks of avafanfics also I mention avafanfics on here because I appreciate her work so yh I know probably doesn't make much sense but I like to know from ta-meauts opinion what she thinks I happen to love avafanfics work,,, hope I didn't annoy you tansan@ If I have I am very sorry
DeleteHey, no fighting kids!
DeleteMaria! Thank you for introducing avafanfics to me, I now know where to find them so you won't have to post the continuing chapters here. I am very flattered that you would like my comments on these fics, and others, however I am slightly reluctant to discuss them like this since I am a writer myself. There are many things in avafanfics works that are good and I think its great that she writes and that people like her works but maybe you should tell her that, and not me...I am sure there are many people on her webpage that discusses the topic at hand and would ove to hear your opinions!
I also think that you don't need to be a good writer to like reading, it is all about personal taste...so you go on an enjoy avafanfics fics without thinking too much.
That said, I reserve myself from commenting on other authors fanfics unless I mention it on my blog myself as "recommended reading".
AHHHHH ok don't worry I wasn't upset with @tansan or anything like that I just sometimes can't help myself when I like something to do with WBDS I like to mention it also like with the mvs and stuff,,, honestly I didn't know I could mention to avafanfics that I like your work,, only because she posts her work up on tumblr I don't have tumblr I did though but deleted it couldn't fathom how to work it lol but I think I will just appreciate her work instead of actually commenting on her work I usually I am a silent reader and don't comment on peoples work I just appreciate them by my self lol but I love your work ta-meaut so much I decided to just comment away lol
DeleteYou haven't annoyed me but just as ta-meaut said it would be better if you post your opinions about avafanfics on the same place you read those fics.
Deleteyes I see where your coming from
DeleteWell, this is awkward.
DeleteAhem, this is Ava from avafanfics. I was recently tipped off by one of my friends (a reader of this blog) that my fic was being discussed on this here. To Miss. maria, I thank you for your feedback on the fic and it is much appreciated. I certainly hope you get a Tumblr account in the near future and learn how to use it properly. I would love for us to chat later on regarding the work, as I truly am honored that you took the time to comment on them. As you can see on my blog, I love to keep an ongoing conversation with my readers. So please, once you've decided you'd like to get a Tumblr again, don't hesitate to drop by. Though I am a bit disconcerted by the fact that you're so young, I don't really have any right to judge and I don't think I would be able to stop you. But thank you for reading and liking my work. I truly am honored. :)
As for the rest and blogmaster Ta-Meaut- I apologize for imposing on your blog. I don't have a blogspot account, so I'm working through Anonymous. But do understand that this is Ava from avafanfics, and I am most content to see that my fic has garnered this kind of attention.
Thank you, and I bid you all good night. :)
AAAAAAAAAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHA! Sorry for laughing guys but you are all making this so much more serious than it is.
DeleteI think we all had a good chat about various things and I think everything is settled now.
Lets move on guys.
PS Maria I am going to remove the comment where you mention your age...just to be sure I don't get into trouble...hope you are ok with that.
really nice MV of yeo un with the song shadows by red I really love the band red any ways here it is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zAba-NYwr1Y&context=C306abc7ADOEgsToPDskJCLLpTc4PjjEExi5kazCUP
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