Friday, January 20, 2012

Poem "jealousy"

Tender turns to thorn

want turns to war

and love...turns to something else entirely

as darkness spreads in your heart

like ink on paper


3 comments:

  1. WOW so beautiful this in my opinion is the story or more correctly a poem of life and mixed emotions in my opinion emotions that shouldn't exist I think we were all supposed to be happy lol but unfortunately not lol like tenderness ones supposed to be sweet and kind but it ends up being sharp as a thorn,,, want does turn to war if you want something that bad it can become greed,,,, and love is a very powerful emotion if it's lost once we've consumed it it can tear our hearts away and darkness and sadness will overcome it,, thats my interpretation anyway love this poem your work is always so beautiful I just love your word usage

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    1. hey, I love the way you say " it can tear our hearts away and darkness and sadness will overcome it" - beautifully said!

      Thanks for complementing my word usage - it makes me proud :D

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  2. HAHA,, OH WOW YOU REALLY THINK SO I also find that very much a compliment,, somebody likes my words hehe I am blushing with happiness hehe xxxx

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