Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Poem "silently, I scream - violently, I dream"


your precious words are a thin, thin string
wrapped around me
so tightly
it tears at my edges

bleeding me raw

but
they are all that keep me together
for I am broken and bent
like a too old puppet

in a shadow play of life

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14 comments:

  1. maria02 May, 2012 20:18

    WOW this is beautiful though I don't really understand what it means other than violently dreaming and silently screaming?????

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    1. Ta-Meaut03 May, 2012 01:46

      Thanks, Maria! I wanted to ocatch the feeling of being unable to hold yourself together unless someone is there to help you. Like you scream inside for help yet dream you get that help.

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    2. maria06 May, 2012 17:54

      ahhhhhh I see yes very interesting really love it

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  2. knerrir06 May, 2012 12:59

    ... I have a knot in my stomach, part II. These two poems made me weep heartful tears of despair. Beautiful they are, in their implacable sadness and truth.

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    Correction: I feel more like I have been punched in the stomach so true do these words ring in my ears.

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    1. Ta-Meaut06 May, 2012 13:02

      Wow, i have to admit that I could not haev known that my poems could give such strong feelings...It makes me think I should be moreo careful in what i write - maybe sometimes my outlet will be someones elses inlet...Please dont feel sad - I will write many other happier poems also :D

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    2. maria06 May, 2012 17:59

      ta-meaut it's true your writings can affect other people especially ones who may actually suffer but don't stop writing like this because maybe it can actually make people see and feel what they actually feel inside some people don't know how they feel so in some ways it can help as much as it sounds strange lol

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    3. maria06 May, 2012 18:14

      I love your stuff so much that I even created a folder on microsoft word called "ta-meaut poems and pillow books" hehe I love your stuff so much saving it in my folder trying to be more organized now so I can keep certain things in a folder lol

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    4. maria06 May, 2012 18:17

      "Ta" with a capital letter lol since you Ta-meaut are pure genius and are The Ta-meaut lol

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    5. Ta-Meaut07 May, 2012 03:07

      Hahaha, you are so cute, Maria! Thank you for that illuminating comment - I do agree with you that sometimes jsut sinking into your pain makes it better somehow because just oppressing it makes it worse - that is sure. I will not stop writing for I cannot live if I don't, it is vital for me to have a let out and I love doing it.

      Hahah, that is so cute that you have a folder with my stuff :D - I am so happy you love it !

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    6. maria07 May, 2012 19:07

      NAWWWWWWWWWWWW YOU THINK I'M CUTE THANK YOU!!!!!! XXXXXXXXXX

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    7. Ta-Meaut08 May, 2012 02:09

      HAHAHAHA...you manage to cheer me up in the most uncanny way...that is indeed a talent!

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    8. maria08 May, 2012 14:08

      NAWWWWWWWWWWW, REALLY!? I've been told my friends I do HAHA and other people but strangely enough I don't see it myself I don't have much confidence so I guess I shine on the outside to others I just don't see it maybe I will someday

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    9. Ta-Meaut09 May, 2012 07:29

      sometimes our greatest talents are the one we shun the most or are unable to see ourselves. I am sure someday your light will shine anough for you to see it too :D

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    10. maria09 May, 2012 12:22

      I hope so very much

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