Sunday, May 13, 2012

Poem "stop if you can"


the Earth kept moving
and I too
trying to keep pace with it

ran in the opposite direction
only to discover

I moved faster
than I wished

3 comments:

  1. this is beautiful, for me personally it reminds me of growing up to fast when kids and teens want to grow up to fast act older and when they finally get to being an adult they regret it and wish they could go back to being a child and live life to the fullest sort of like how you wrote "I moved faster than I wished"

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    1. ah, yes a very accurate idea - we all seem to want to go somewhere fast either physically or mentally. Maybe we all just need to stop before we get too far...

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    2. yes exactly!!!!

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