Last night, when the moon was full
I dreamt of Death
She rose from the earth like a goddess
with a supernova crown
lawless
fearless
dauntless
She whispered
"Take a handful of earth, let it crumble.
Take a breath of cold air, fill your lungs.
Then, work my field, deep and true"
then,
boundless
breathless
endless
she exploded in blinding light
filling the field with her gentle rain
Together we planted the grains of death
so they can sprout and bloom
and immortality, will crumble like earth in your hand
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From each flower
knowledge flows
From each root
life grows
and each seed
moves the World forward
one grain at a time
for the sprouts of beginnings
only take root
in a heart touched by Death
Breathtaking poem in prose.
ReplyDeleteI had goosebumps and tears pearling. The rain as a result of a supernova-death explosion, seeding the universe and making life possible... Wow. This metaphor is so powerful. You touched onto Blake:
"To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour."
and the essence of life, with a yet more chilling, compelling reference to death. Impermanence. Everything is so fleeting and so unique.
You are becoming a favourite poet of mine.
I'm awed.
Again: what is it with the moon and the compelling description of death rising from the Earth? It is so appealing to the senses. It reminds me of the lake scene which I so worshipped in your SKK fanfiction. A moment of grace.
ReplyDeleteI just love this image. Wish I could take a picture.
Ooh, I am awed myself to be compared to Blake, I really feel myself that I am nowhere close to him in prose.
ReplyDeleteYes, I also like death portrayed as a woman connected to the fertile earth and moon - it is like the opposite of what you would assume but I think its truer. Death is luscious or as they so immaculately say in "The Fountain" : Death is the road to awe...
Thank you for reading and being my fan!
my definition of this is nature like flowers and trees are life and people destroy it anyway's beautiful!!!!!!!!!
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