Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Poem "human?"

Assume you were me
and
pretend I was you

What would you do?
and
Who would I be?
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8 comments:

  1. knerrir17 October, 2011 22:49

    Ah, what then? A very simple poem, yet so emotional! I love the way you use single words such as "and", isolated from the rest; to make a bridge between thoughts and between feelings

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    1. Ta-Meaut15 January, 2012 07:20

      Thank you, you make me sound more brilliant than I am :D

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  2. maria14 January, 2012 23:51

    WOW this is beautiful it makes me think thought what a couple is thinking if they had switched roles the girl be the guy and the guy be the girl lol

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    1. Ta-Meaut15 January, 2012 07:20

      Yes, its a topic that occupies my mind more often than I would like...

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    2. maria21 January, 2012 02:35

      yh lol it's like the songs if I were a boy by beyonce and ciara's song like a boy they sort of switch up the roles

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    3. Ta-Meaut21 January, 2012 11:19

      Yes, I love this song and the video is great!

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  3. maria23 January, 2012 18:37

    yes I agree there quite cool but for some bizarre reason the title for this poem reminded me of ellie goulding's song human lol which I love and adore that song

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