Monday, December 20, 2010

Poem "stay, or struggle"

Let your brilliant mind dissolve.
Feel it lazily trickle into the hair fine cracks of your conscience.

Lick it off your numb fingers.
Smear it on your flesh.
Let it coat your pupils into haze, and stare.

You are already underneath, what need is there to breath?
Just open your mouth and let it smother your lungs with its oily sweetness.

Will you stay? or are you going to struggle?

either way...you are already here...

You think I will let you go now...

3 comments:

  1. hmmmmm this one is beautiful but yet crazy I think it's to do with a relationship or maybe to do with water

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    1. It is about letting go of your rational senses, and enjoy it.

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    2. AHHHHHH YH like getting rid of your sensibility and getting rid of being sensible just for a short while and enjoying being a bit more wilder hehe,,, this poem is really beautiful like I've said all your poems and pillow books are hehe

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