Thursday, December 2, 2010

Poem "hands"

your warm hands
on my cold skin
lights up my body like a powerplant.

3 comments:

  1. This I think this is a romantic one hehe it reminds me of when i read a story not necessarily a vampire novel lol but when the writer of fanfic writer uses descriptions like are skin touched at it felt like electric tingling all up my arm (something like that hehe)

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    1. hahahha, I love when I can make my readers physically feel things by my mere wording. Great!

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  2. LOL well I wouldn't say I felt it but hehe I would love to in the future BAHAHAHA lol I just love these little descriptions which can make you tell what there on about hehe

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