Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Poem "aspiration"

To make the bell
sound
to the farthest corners of the Earth

You must strike it
harder
than you ever have before

dividing the hurt
between you

3 comments:

  1. WOW this is beautiful can you tell me what this means?? I think I have a interpretation of this but not quite sure how to write it lol??????

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    1. I wanted to show that to make a difference (to make people far away hear the bell) you need to strike it (work much harder) much harder than you ususally do, and if you do the hurt (hard work) will be worth it.
      Hope it makes sense ;)

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    2. I THINK IT JUST ABOUT MAKES SENSE for me anyway,, do you mean like for a person to make a difference they have to make the people hear call out to them (I don't mean literally calling out and shouting out but in a metaphorical sense) like for protesters who sometimes want to make a difference some of them try really hard and keep trying hard and eventually they will be heard if they keep trying there best especially the ones who want to help people and make the world a better place

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