Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Poem "flan"

my beloved,
as a flan in a cupboard,
slowly, slowly collapsing in a river of sweetness,
ready to be languorously licked of a spoon

Comment: For those of you who don't know what a flan is see: Flan

4 comments:

  1. Ahaha. I laughed at this one very hard, just at the idea of a flan slowly collapsing in a cupboard... And still very sensual, which is one of the words I would use most to describe your literary talent!

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  2. AHAHA I think I get this one but that's the beauty of poems you can just interpret however you like

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  3. yes, that is very true...seems it makes people laugh, this one...

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  4. well I'm not sure if I'M right but I would interpret it as a flan (which in my opinion kinda looks like a pancake) has collapsed in golden syrup lol and ready to be hungrily eaten HAHA but I think you can interpret in a dirty way as well HAHA lol

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